childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions
It is true that obesity in many parts of the world has been getting worse in recent years. There are a variety of possible reasons for this problem, but measures can be definitely taken to deal with this problem.
One of the main causes of the obesity is that poor diet or bad eating habits. In other words, children really like to eat fried foods, chips and sugary drinks which may lead to overweight and increases the risk of diseases like diabetes and high cholesterol. The solution is for parents to give children healthy food that possible by choosing healthier cooking methods such as steaming and boiling in order to ensure that children have a healthy diet. Another way to deal with obesity is that government not only should band junk food from school menus, but also recommend eating five portions of fruit and vegetables per day.
Another issue which may cause obesity is unhealthy lifestyles, such as excessive sleep, lack of exercise and inadequate physical activity, because children tend to play computer games rather than playing outside or doing sports. As a result, they feel embarrassed to be in touch with their friends because of being overweight. To solve this problem, the government should encourage children to take regular exercise by allocating more time for sports on school timetables, and parents should restrict the time which children spend to play computer games.
Third cause of the problem is that genetic factors, which means that some children being obesity due to disruption of metabolic or hormonal activities. This problem could be addressed by prescribing medications or using medical weight loss therapies.
In conclusion, childhood obesity has become a major cause of concern in the last few years, so parents and government should focus their attention to solve this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, third, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10702341137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52769361667 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7417207259 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252845290091 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093961680557 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773137410987 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160424686212 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738568218307 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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