Getting married before completing the school education is often a debated topic. Few people argue that youngers should marry after getting a job for their livelihood. Recent research shows that about 30% people get married before even finishing their basic level of academics. In my opinion, people should get married only after they get into a career. We will discuss both sides in the below essay with examples and conclude.
On one hand, it is better to get married at a young age since the understanding between the partners is pretty high. They can study linearly and hence it would enhance their bonding. Additionally, they will learn to live a simple life since they are financially dependent. They will focus on getting the job together rather than personal commitment and they will support each other from earlier stages. Not only that but also once they get into the job, they can start their family life immediately. They can spend time in their school or college, apparently spending more quality time together.
On contrary, if they marry before even settling in a work, they may have to face critical challenges for their livelihood such as financial dependence, exposing immature behavior, family pressure and misunderstanding due to marriage in an early period. When they can’t handle the family and academics in parallel, they become school drop-outs eventually becoming an unsuccessful people in their life. They would not be able to satisfy their roles and responsibilities and that avenue for some life threating decisions such as committing suicide, killing others etc.
To elucidate, even though there are fewer advantages of getting married before completing the school, the disadvantages of marrying formerly before finishing the academics fairly outweigh the advantages. It is my hope, people should be matured to take a decision on their marriage since it is a crucial lifetime decision.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, may, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26623376623 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7356396086 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8253198685 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219065797787 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925034694581 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927416710351 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161630730413 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103725124811 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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