It is becoming increasingly expensive for museums to be open to the public. What would be the best solution to keep them open, in your opinion?
In this contemporary world, museums are losing its charm. Though from being cultural rich to display art or history, museums provide us lot of knowledge in different genres, people find it boring and pointless to visit museums. However, it has become amazingly costly to maintain the popularity and keep them running for the people. In my opinion, with some measures taken by the authorities we can keep it running smooth for the public.
With the increase in use of internet these days, people have the access to all the information related to any given topic such as culture, religion, history or any kind art. This has led to the major decline in number of visitors to museums. People find it very monotonous to visit the museum just to see few pictures or information which is easily available on internet. In turn, it is becoming very difficult for the museum authorities to keep them operational for the public.
However, number of measures can be taken into consideration to deal with this problem. Firstly, some activities could be added for the visitors to keep them occupied for longer period. For example, in art museum some painting workshops can be arranged for kids and adults who have the interest in drawing and painting. This would be an added attraction. Similarly, some events can be organised to promote the museums. Having a small cafe or some food stalls with souvenir shops can gain popularity and help visitors to plan a day outs with families.
To conclude, I believe that museums should not just be a source of information but also be the source of entertainment for its visitors. With few added attractions and activities people would love to spend their valuable time and money in visiting museums with their families.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96283783784 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63586268543 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6012771 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274570889422 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986970692313 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744717640228 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171397547669 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299226185292 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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