It is becoming increasingly popular in some parts of the world nowadays to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, there is a growing trend of exploring the past of one’s own family history. It certainly is a positive development as diving deep into the family’s history not only gives a glimpse of the culture and traditions related to the ethnic background but also helps the individuals to feel connected with their ancestors.
People feel curious to know about the past related to their family because they want answers relating to festivals, cultural values and certain inherited traits. People all around the world celebrate different festivals and traditions however, the reason behind celebrating such festivals can only be found by exploring the family history of that particular ethnic group. For instance, families of particular town in Himachal do not celebrate the most important festival of Hindus known as Dusshera as it is considered disrespectful to burn the statue of lord Ravana who was worshipped by the ancestors of the families residing in this town. Another reason is this that certain skills and talents are carried on from one generation to another in certain families. Therefore, people want to know the pioneer from their family for starting it in the first place. For instance, classical music is a talent that is passed from one generation to another in certain families in India.
In addition, immigration from one country to another is quiet common nowadays. People who are settled in a different country and have lost touch with their family members feel the need to gain knowledge about their family history and other members of their family. Consequently, they go as far as travelling miles away to their hometown in distant countries to put an end to the questions about their past and meet their ancestors such as grandparents, uncles and aunts.
In conclusion, gaining knowledge about one’s own family history is a positive development. It not only gives a clear glimpse about certain inherited traits that are carried from one generation to another but also helps in discovering the reason for celebrating the traditions and festivals in one’s family.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18879056047 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75056940339 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477876106195 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4649487512 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193019442636 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835043276536 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489464999629 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128351878054 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408543331284 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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