It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.
There are quite a number of medium for disseminating information in today's world. whether over the internet, through the television, radio, or social media, it has become almost impossible to escape the influence of media in our every day lives. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of living in a media rich society.
Exposure to various forms of information such as adverts, through various mediums has an overbearing impact on how we live. For example commercials from car companies such as Toyota or Nissan conditions our minds to acquire cars from either brands. Also, the lifestyle of people on fashion, music and politics are influenced by the media. Various fashion updates from the leading designers in Milan, Paris and London are communicated through the media to influence perspectives. The media is a tool used to influence human behavior.
Despite the benefits of the media, there are drawbacks. Quite a number of commercials that are not age appropriate are shown to children. technological innovations such as smartphones have increased access to negative media through social media apps and the internet. Illicit contents are easily accessible to children and minors. in addition, not all information can be said to be true. Activities such as betting and other get rich quick schemes are advertised without communicating the possibility of huge losses.
In conclusion, while there are merits to media exposure such as easy access to information, updates on trends and recent developments, there are also demerits due to misleading information. Much of our activities today are predicated on contents and commercials we have seen at one time or the other, we must learn to identify and filter out negative media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27956989247 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92951064257 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1414563554 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27724973354 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089858963809 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906642813268 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17705573912 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106761671527 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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