Is it better for children to learn to read by using the online material or by using printed material?Discuss and give your opinion.

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Is it better for children to learn to read by using the online material or by using printed material?

Discuss and give your opinion.

In this world of technology, there is abundant knowledge on the internet, giving any information on the click of mouse. Regardless of this fact, few people prefer to teach their kids from paperback resources. In my opinion, both options are equally good and children should take benefit of e-books along with paperback books.

To begin with, the world of internet has opened the door of knowledge as every information is made available at almost no cost. In other words, the search engines are designed to give information on every subject that exist in the world. While searching topic, the google search engine floats inundate data; fostering the child to learn in-depth from variety of authors across the world. In addition to this, internet has option of teaching through graphics and videos. These educational videos make the subject more interactive and attractive for learning. Oftentimes, reading the book may not help the pupil to understand but when shown with graphics in video it becomes easy.

Notwithstanding that the online learning has many benefits, the importance of books cannot be mitigated. They remain the knowledge bank of all times. Admittedly, the content in books is validated before publication and is copyright of author; while the book content on internet is not always reliable and upgraded. Moreover, the book owns the credit of having precise and up-to-date contents related to topic. Some people claim that reading from book is easier than reading from computer screen; while some prefer books because they can carry it easily while travelling or relaxing. Hence, due to many such advantages, it is equally important to use books as source of learning.

In conclusion, I pen down saying that books as well as online resources contribute equally to forge child's future. Undoubtedly, online tutorials foster interactive learning while books provide reliable and concise in-depth learning about the topic. Hence, both are important.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tance of books cannot be mitigated. They remain the knowledge bank of all times. ...
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Line 13, column 174, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to while'
Suggestion: to while
...e tutorials foster interactive learning while books provide reliable and concise in-d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31948881789 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64546001597 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597444089457 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.675189359 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10584212341 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030949212526 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301328265474 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634511904906 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127236104713 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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