It is better to teach sports to young people at school as an alternative to playing computer games at home. Give your opinion.
Nobody would dispute the fact that physical workout is extremely essential for maintaining good health. Although playing computer games at home is more fascinating and easy, it puts a detrimental effect on physical and mental health of children therefore it is argued teaching sports is a sound alternative to divert their minds and channeling their efforts towards beneficial outcome.
It is evidently clear that sports as a subject when imparted to students boosts their physical fitness. Students who participate more in sports activities have more strength and improved metabolism. If these activities are not taught at primary level younglings become more prone to health issues at a young age. Henceforth, introducing physical games in formative stage of a child act as a key influencing factor in sound health. According to BBC, a survey revealed that young children who encounter sports at earlier age tend to have more strong immune system, therefore; they are unlikely to confront any severe diseases in life.
Apparently, another added advantage of sports over computer games is that it inbuilds the sense of competition in a student which is a predominant factor for achieving success in life. This is because when a student participates in sports he inculcates a feeling of performing better. Not only competitive attitude but also sports bring a lot of other traits such as while being in a team children learn team spirit, empathy, cooperation and working towards one goal. To vindicate, with the advent of sports activities it has been seen that participants become more cooperative and socially interactive among other teammates.
To conclude, sports is a far more better option over computer games as it begets plethora of benefits being the first is better health and other is holistic development of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25938566553 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85139234897 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6978442598 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.416666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236274505542 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796650414643 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06588604369 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142822907548 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322932915822 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.