It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all schools.
What do you think?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Education is the fundamental right of every citizen. Government has established various reforms for developing necessary educational skills and uplifting the literacy rate of the country. Nowadays, along with education, physical education is also given high importance which has benefited a population with good health and body, details on this idea is shared below.
In this modern era, where everyone is surrounded by the technology-driven world, striving hard to cope-up with the technical knowledge, including young children and teenagers given rise to becoming less physically fit in this competitive future. It has been observed that pupils tend to spend more time on-screen gaming platforms has affected social skills. Policymakers must make physical education in school’s compulsory which will help the children keeping fit and healthy, reducing the percentage of obesity in the younger generation.
Furthermore, sports are always determined for physical fitness. More than that, it also helps in developing social as well as interpersonal skills. Every term Mumbai University organizes various sports event throughout the year. This helps to boost morale and also the students who participate get to know about the things happening in other regions and colleges.
Nevertheless, when students graduate, it has been observed that the students who have actively participated in sports and other activities tend to perform better than the rest who did nothing other than studying throughout the career. The skillset developed by games not only makes the individual smarter but enhances his team working abilities, which is very much essential in the corporate world.
Therefore, I adhere with the suggestion of keeping physical education and sports activities compulsory, this will help to develop the young generations with less obesity, enduring healthy physique and developing social skills set making them prepare for better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72164948454 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87223147242 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2395710219 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141776076748 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519215844235 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047940889051 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078615457431 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240937241381 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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