Traveling around the world has been one of the most exciting activities since it became inexpensive for a great number of people and there are two reasons why it is a positive development.
Firstly, a visit to different countries provides significant changes in people's lives regardless of a period of their stay. For example, a short homestay in the US for a month had a great impact on me such as a way of socializing, communicating and behaviour when I meet someone new. I am now more likely to get on well with people from the beginning because this month enhanced my ability of building a relationship with others. Secondly, It is essential to be cultural diversification in this century to understand each other and for the better future. People who travel to other countries tend to be interested in at least their culture, language or food and also willing to share own culture while they interact with local. Therefore, there is an opportunity to know the uniqueness of each country and develop a further culture.
In conclusion, traveling abroad is not only a stimulating development but also it can be a turning point for some people and a process of positive change for the world.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82038834951 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94872845964 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650485436893 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.0251618867 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 124.125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 7.06120827912 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172721544666 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696133314039 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384754467677 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123479235752 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232859057596 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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