It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV, and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh the advantages?
In todays world, people wish to own luxury items such as an automobile, a television, and a refrigerator. I think having such wonderful equipments can be more beneficial than the consequences. In this essay, I will discuss the points and explain my reason behind the rationale along with supporting examples.
On the one hand, the technological advancements has gained popularity these days. It has made ease and convenient to the consumers. The movies, series or any new can now travel world wide through the medium of mass media. For instance, one can watch shows on digital screen and pass time without getting bored that too irrespective of any time. Similarily, owning a car can be useful as per your requirements. Although the temperature is rising globally, people can consume their fresh food at their own pace without being worried of stale food. Also, it does not refrain from enjoying cool items like popsicles, and ice creams.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of such comfortable and leisurely items and activities. The air quality index is deteriorating day by day this is because the exhaust and toxic fumes are generated excessively using each vehicle. This is a major loss worldwide wide leading to the greenhouse effect. Utilising a television happens to be waste of time and money which produces surcharging bills. Moreover, the electronic gadgets specially refrigerator gives a hefty amount too.
To conclude, Inspite of having lot of drawbacks such as waste of money, time, and natural resources, the advantages outweigh the disadvantges when it comes to comfort and budget. If you are ready to afford them, you can definitely own it happily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13454545455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87985307247 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683636363636 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.445784618 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0588235294 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12896577387 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363082939627 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458528589669 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838079956074 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548065491419 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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