It is an obvious truth that various medias are responsible in the increasing rate of crimes especially in youngsters. The increasing amount of violence that is shown regularly in films has been a cause of concern fore some time. such films makes violence seems entertaining and exciting. To tell the truth, development is causing some problem in society. This essay outline the reasons of that and offer some solutions.
First of all, different medias, especially television is showing some violence films that the fist role of film or the hero is admired because of being violent and being in favour of violence. So, people especially teenagers and younger people may think, being aggressive and angry is something that brings you respect and other will admire you. Another worrying trend is that in media, there is no real consequence of violence and it persuade people to think with themselves that, violence is not a big deal in society and will not effect on the country, culture and the mood of people.
There are a lot of steps that can be taken in order to tackle this controversial issue. Government should have more control over the different programs of media on the one hand, and provide better education on the other. producers must be prevented from making these meaningless violence in media and instead make more tragic consequences of act and this would educate people that violence is real and is associated with terrible effects.
In conclusion, the effect of media in increasing the amount of crime can not be neglected and there is needed to regulate this industry and inform people about the human suffering that violence brings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, in conclusion, first of all, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963898917 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60822767307 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1166348514 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252749309953 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859997803976 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538368912512 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150095387818 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275584332338 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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