It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in media.
Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime?
What solutions can you offer to deal with this situation?
Although one of the primary notion for increase in juvenile crime is the violence in media, there are other factors which contribute as well. This essay will discuss the influence of notorious media in encouraging underage offenders along with other factors, and propose possible solutions to curb this.
There are a plethora of elements that contribute to brutality of media such as crime sequences in movies and video games, which majority of the adolescents follow. This is because such children will not have the logical thinking capabilities, therefore, they do not identify the wrong actions, instead, they follow it as a trend. For example, the process of stealing a monument from a gift shop may appear interesting and teenagers try to replicate the same. To combat this problem, government should pass stricter regulations to restrict the content watched by pubescent. By virtue of this, we can reduce the influence and illegal acts among this age group.
Another cardinal cause of juvenile offenders, an important one is the lack of education and employment opportunities. Owing to the fact that backward communities and areas in many countries, offspring of parents from such backgrounds are not able to afford education, which leads to unemployment. For instance, it is reported in media that there is a substantial increase in crime rate among the age group of 16 to 22. To alleviate this problem, if there are more schools initiated by the government, then there will be families who can afford to get their young ones educated. As a result, there will be better sense prevailing among teenagers and it leads to involvement in petty jobs while reducing involvement in crime to earn money.
In conclusion, bad influence of media through films and computer crime games are vital reasons for increase in juvenile crime. However, this can be minimized by strict laws and improving education and work opportunities in geographically challenged areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21135646688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8723952201 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583596214511 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1173775116 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303891946153 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944453127239 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584474547286 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193399994533 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449160213722 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.