It is quite right that top sports people should be paid a lot of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, compared to other professionals, sportsmen earn a lot of money during his professional career. It is often argued by some individuals that a sportsperson makes a huge amount of money since they spend whole lives achieving that status. And, I firmly agree with this notion and will elaborate the reason behind this argument in the following essay.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason of getting highly paid of top sports stars is due to the tremendous struggle and time that they have invested in it. Apart from this, the general public considers a top sportsmen lucky by the current status of their well being, but doesn't know the fact behind of rigorous training and efforts involved that are invisible to everyone. For instance, a Basketball player has to start training from teenage to perform exceptionally well and later goes through many trials before selected as a paid player in a well-known team. Consequently, a highly amount of expense would be well-deserving after considering the above factors.
Moreover, a star player has to take care of his healthy diet and physically fit lifestyle which does not come with a lowest standard of living. A sportsperson has to invest a lot of time in training and practice sessions before the tournament or competition to give their hundred percent during the main game. Furthermore, a star player put his privacy and personal life at risk and have to live a presentable life which does not come cheap. As a result, a lot of expense is required to live a such kind of lifestyle. Also, the fashion industry and media use top star players as their brand ambassadors which in turns provide a multimillion annual income which is inevitable for them.
To conclude, the higher earnings of athletes and professional sportsmen are often required whether they are worth it or not. This essay has clearly stated the above reasons and necessity to earn huge salaries by sportsmen and I totally concur that their high pays are justified.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ve invested in it. Apart from this, the general public considers a top sportsmen lucky by the ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sportsman'?
Suggestion: sportsman
...his, the general public considers a top sportsmen lucky by the current status of their we...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...current status of their well being, but doesnt know the fact behind of rigorous traini...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('highly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('amount') instead of another adjective.
...yer in a well-known team. Consequently, a highly amount of expense would be well-deserving afte...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... fit lifestyle which does not come with a lowest standard of living. A sportspers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97023809524 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77668842018 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8423418513 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091030800827 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031023001796 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275518958042 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496637102431 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340748773718 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.