It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to provide and inspire. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher??

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It is thought by some that a school teacher's role is to provide and inspire. However, other people believe that a teacher's primary role is to pass on knowledge. What do you think is the role of a teacher??

The role of teacher at school increasingly has contrary opinions among many people. While teachers own responsibility to provide students with motivation and inspiration, others strongly agree that their major work is knowledge transfer. In my opinion, not only are teachers enthusiastic inspiratory but a person giving students lively examples to lessons as well as follows.
First and foremost, encouragement from teachers attaches an importance to student's education at school. To be specific, students need a teacher who gives them more inspirations to develop, importantly, instructions to do basic things first. Besides, tutor can show how to determine their target to try their best, which creates opportunities to reach their dreams day by day.
Next, teacher is the person showing how to put knowledge into practice, thus, teacher's knowledge passing plays a vital role in students' education at school. For instances, technology demands instructions from teachers as this.field owns many sorts of practical knowledge which is drawn from experiences.Consequently, they are essential to make students completely understand applied science in real life.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that teacher's role is essential to education's development, which is because they are not only likely to urge students to make efforts and inspire enthusiasm but also person who conveys knowledge.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Consequently
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58215962441 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28364070532 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0308550434 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.111111111 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24175229788 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113103755534 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722430759118 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154093610585 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460763709588 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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