With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends?
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, online communication is becoming more and more universally popular, the number of user increases rapidly. People strongly believe that thanks to it, not only will loneliness permanently disappear in their lives but social communication is likely to provide them with an opportunity to make friends with others. Personally, I partly agree with this opinion as follows.
From positive perspectives, this means of communication is able to forges closer relationships among people worldwide through the Internet. To be specific, the widespread use of social network and messenger provides them with chances to become friends with each other. They have chatted on the Internet for a period of time,hence, they have mutual understanding of characters, personalities or interests. For instances, I have got acquaintances with an English soccer player in a group for fans of sports on Facebook. Apparently, we have many interests in common, especially our consuming passion for soccer.Additionally, This means of communication is also considered to be the interaction tool liberating them from loneliness as well. It is no doubt that some people have to leave home to attend higher education or even work in a strange city at the age of 18. Nevertheless, distance does not matter, as all they need is a computer or smartphone, they can reduce their homelessness by giving their family a video call through the Internet in their free time.
However, in fact, many people have a tendency to connect with only friends through the Internet without conversation with acquaintances in real life. This issue leads to distant relationships among them. It is undeniable that youngster would desire to own a smartphone rather than play games with friends, which gradually lead to . As a result, I have voiced concern about the reduction of outdoor activities as the shortage of interaction in real life. Are you capable of imagining how quiet will the life be?
By way of conclusion, even though online communication has both pros and cons, its advantages overweight its disadvantages due to the potential advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31343283582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21307296345 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8881754064 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229263125202 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074786651538 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698513679203 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13165422185 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730360906255 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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