Many teenagers today find it difficult to balance the demands of their study at school and the share of household chores at home. What do you think are the causes of this situation and what can family members do to reduce the problem?
Students nowadays have difficulties in keeping the balance between studying at school and doing housework at home. There are some causes of this problematic issue and solutions to this.
There are many factors contributing to this matter. First and foremost, it is caused by pressure from studying at school. The more competitive studying at school is, the more homework students are given, hence, they spend most of their time doing exercises, which leads to the lack of time to do household chores. Secondly, students have obligations to take part in after-school activities such as extracurricular activities including sports. Some recent research show that they have to study for 8 hours at school a day and 4 hours at home at average, which isn't possible to share household chores with other family members.
Therefore, people have to take actions to resolve this problem, especially family members. First of all, family members are able to reduce their amount of housework by doing it for them. To be specific, while the parent at home can prepare for meals for family, washing dishes wasting about 15 minutes is more suitable for children. Next, parents should provide students guidance to learn how to better manager their time, get organized, which are all important life skill. They can also tutor their students and give them new materials or how to take notes and study.
In conclusion, although it has become a difficulty for students as its reasons, they are able to overcome these difficulties if their parents help them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63826220075 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2547921025 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3178974753 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113881135296 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808484399989 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189259928425 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113318815051 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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