communication through internet has tremendously increasing those days,people can get more friends and will not be solo with the advancement of thise.i firmly agree with thise statement because it is ability to connect beyond boundaries of the nation and affordability.
First of all, online communication allows to connect the people through out the world even though they are so far in any time. It will helps to stay connected with friends and family so people's can interact when they feel lonely. Further more, Most of times loneliness will not occur with a frequent and ability communication between sender and reciever. Additionally some socializing apps like facebook,twitter,instagram,and tinder facilities to find new friends who are similar to our personality. These apps enables them to maintain healthy relationship with their friend and unfriend option thuse people's don't have a chance to be solo.
The another reason is that the affodability of the internet in these days exponitially apreciatable.most of the network providers are giving decent packages for internet to communicate with their friends. Thses is huge development of internet which can help individuals to contact friends without being alone because of price. For instance vedio calling is also great tool to mingle with Family members and friends so people no need to be stay solo and enjoy the benefits of technology.
To conclude that internet pays a wonderful role to connect people because of its technology. The ability to connect entire world and the economic benefit of the internet peoples unable to have new friends as well frequent communication with their loved one who make them happy without being alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communication
communication through internet has tremendously incre...
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Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...t has tremendously increasing those days,people can get more friends and will not be so...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'connecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: connecting
...rst of all, online communication allows to connect the people through out the world even t...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...munication allows to connect the people through out the world even though they are so far i...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...gh they are so far in any time. It will helps to stay connected with friends and fami...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more, Most of times loneliness will not occur with a frequent and ability commun...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...munication between sender and reciever. Additionally some socializing apps like facebook,twi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , twitter
...ally some socializing apps like facebook,twitter,instagram,and tinder facilities to find...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ing apps like facebook,twitter,instagram,and tinder facilities to find new friends w...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'enable'.
Suggestion: enable
... similar to our personality. These apps enables them to maintain healthy relationship w...
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Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...riend and unfriend option thuse peoples dont have a chance to be solo. The anothe...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing alone because of price. For instance vedio calling is also great tool to ming...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, thus, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23484006449 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1013848145 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.545454545 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330353067786 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124956037621 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655924947163 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21135702653 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384336290073 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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