These days, there is a controversial debate between members of society about the impacts of early marriage. There are a number of people who interpret the impacts of such marriages as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent’s view. I am inclined to believe that marriage after education and acquiring a job is more beneficial and should be promoted.
There are several reasons why delayed marriages are advantageous. First of all, it is argued that education and job play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that such practices equip a person with a more well-rounded perspective of life; therefore they would create a feeling of accomplishment and confidence which consequently open avenue to new achievements, so that a youngster’s enthusiasm and determination will be amplified toward many daunting tasks. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University has found that experiencing work environments before marriage could enhance a person’s intellectual abilities to make decisions related to family and personal.
In addition, it is claimed that those couples who got married before finalizing their education and possessing an appropriate job are more struggling financially compared to the others. This is to say that being financially independent would instill strong feelings of self-esteem in individuals so that they are more expected to perform up to expectations in arduous situations that would take place in a marriage. Take child care for example, even affluent couples have to do uphill struggle to afford the expenses which are posed on the family.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that marriage after completing studies and establishing in a good job would enhance the quality of living for young couples and increase their life-satisfaction. It is expected that the youngsters take cognizance of the facts provided and begin to adopt this lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53289473684 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30567065038 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615131578947 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9609506579 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.166666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948463753781 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318521600346 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424719567679 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585058227649 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362810973917 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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