Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
Large corporations have a marketing department that device strategies for the round-the-clock bombardment of advertisement through varied mediums, and tempts people to buy their products. This essay discusses a few demerits associated with this phenomenon and suggestions to boost buying from local businesses.
At the onset, bigshot companies have deep pockets to rope in local and international celebrities and athletes to endorse their products. People emulate their role models and purchase stuffs irrespective of the price. Consequently, in most cases, they end up having heavy debts that take years to recuperate. In the case of children, it becomes difficult for moderately earning parents to discipline and content their offspring. Secondly, it becomes hard for a small-scale business to run their enterprises due to increased buying from supermarkets. Sadly, it impacts the livelihood of local communities. What is more, international fast food chains promote food items full of carbohydrates, sugars, and preservatives. The increased number of obese folks in the society is a classic example of its adverse effects.
As for encouraging the buying of local products, the government should roll out a campaign for supporting domestic stuff. To quote an instance, the Indian government started a drive ‘Vocal for Local’ and there was a surprise rise in purchasing of indigenous products in almost all categories. The local municipal should give subsidiary for starting startups as well as should reduce rates of electricity and taxes for small bricks and mortar shops to boost their bottom lines. Furthermore, small shops should focus on service and quality to satisfy customers.
To conclude, in the world of business marketing and promotions play a key role, however, it depends on the person to have a sense of conscience about what, where, and how much to buy. At the same time, it is the onus of the government to encourage local products.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, as well as, in most cases, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42810457516 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08605587585 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5608628329 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310787393503 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827599450566 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563608027137 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180906205055 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356707148423 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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