Nowadays, people from the rural areas are moving into the urban areas for many reasons based on fast developments occurring in the urban area and for various opportunities. Some people may opt for a big shopping centre to replace the smaller shops, although is a good and positive development while others may prefer smaller chops to the bigger shops. In my view, is a two way thing based on preferences from individuals which will be written below.
To begin with, large shopping centres are a good development as it integrates unlimited variety of products that people wants. Moreover, it also creates job opportunities for people out there. For instance, large shopping mall can have a salon, cinema, restaurant, and pharmacy etc. All in one, this enables people to have a range of options of excitements. In addition, this can also help them to optimize fuel cost, rather than driving at different locations to purchase a product or go to the movies, they can achieve that in one place. Hence, it is nice that large shopping malls with its lots of benefits can outweigh the smaller malls.
On the other hands, there are flip sides on this matter. Firstly, safety concern is a factor when there is a large shopping mall. A case in point, because large shopping malls has a lot shops in it, it attracts crowd with different intent of coming to the mall and such thing could lead to kidnap or pick pockets when there is less attention among the crowd. Secondly, products can be expensive. Sometimes, some shops tend to increase the price of some products without their customers knowing while the small shops have a less expensive sort of products that can be purchased. At this point, is all based on the individual’s choice of what they want.
In summary, it is paramount to have a big shopping mall as it helps people to save cost, buy all products in one place with varieties of shop available and create window for jobs. However, it can be expensive which is why some people may prefer the smaller shops as it is less expensive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...smaller shops as it is less expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in summary, sort of, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76685393258 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57879702658 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7982774462 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9411764706 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240529455061 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794371120918 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599050102523 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142460382643 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640212717161 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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