In last 20 years, there have been significant developments in the field of information technology. For example, the world wide web and communication by email. However, these developments in IT are likely to have more negative impacts than positive in future. To what extent do you agree?
In the late 90s, there was a paradigm shift in the information technology domain with the introduction internet and email communication, which primarily benefited the society in terms of information transmission. However, as the technology underwent several iterations of development, it started losing its glory and in fact, the darker side took a commendable control over the technology.
It is an undeniable fact that the electronic mailing system changed the face of communication by allowing people to interact or share their message in a split of seconds. This transformation bought an extensive change in all the sectors like business, education, medicine ecterta, and provided several new opportunities to the people. For example, a student in a small town can clarify his questions to an expert who lives miles away in minutes.
Being said that, we should not neglect the negativity aroused due to this invention. People completely forgot the traditional method of communication such as letter writing, sending greeting cards, meeting in person. Everyone, from the elder people to children, they are more comfortable in connecting through online streaming or discussing through emails. This project that the future we are marching forward is not in the right direction.
It is understood that the internet is growing large in size and it is nearly difficult or impossible to control its uses. Hence, the benefits we attain from this development will undoubtedly overshadow by the negative aspects of this technology.
To conclude, we cannot refrain from using the technology citing their negative issues. It is better to identify a workaround technique such as inculcate social responsibility in children and educate the advantages and disadvantages of this invention. This will helps us to excel in our career and build a strong society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: large
...understood that the internet is growing large in size and it is nearly difficult or impossibl...
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Line 9, column 262, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...advantages of this invention. This will helps us to excel in our career and build a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, so, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44290657439 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10270084817 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7122806524 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993386595278 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283914863427 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267197263021 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499787881327 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227365686471 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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