Some people believe that dangerous sport should be banned. Do you agree of disagree?
Sports are gaining ultimate attention in recent years due to increased awareness of physical fitness, however, there are quite a few perilous games raises concern among the public. In my perspective, these games should be regulated to play in a safer environment instead of banning them altogether. Every sport has its own issues and causes and we should engage with proper safety measures.
Let us discuss the bullfighting game, this is one of the ancient games played in Spain and the history goes beyond 7th Century. In this game, the matador has to perform in front of a roaring bull and there are high chances of getting injured by the fiercely bull. Playing this sport enhances several skills such as attention, physical fitness, and dexterous personality, however, one should be properly trained and aware of all the consequences exists in the game. By this way, the player and audience attain their purpose from the game.
Secondly, I would like to emphasize the cricket game and its evolvement during last few decades which made them one of the safest game played globally. In the early 19th century, the batsmen often injured by the cricket ball especially in head and chest and at times lead to the death of the player. However, the cricketing world did not think to drop the game, instead of they invented safety measures such as helmet and chest pad to reduce the risk involved in the game. Even with new sophisticated gears, there was a fatal incident happened in Australia in 2007 when a young player was hit by the cricket ball on the head and collapsed to death. By this incident, we cannot altogether define cricket as a risky sport and ban them. We should constantly look for safety measures to play the game in a secure environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, second, secondly, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83112582781 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5060713086 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.994970098 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711547959337 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307257636488 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374187969962 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611803173748 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037173944465 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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