limited money should be spent on computer equipment or a good teacher. discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are many people who are thinking we should not spend more money on computer equipment or good teachers. While
others have a contemporary point of view about this given statement. According to my opinion, limited money should be invested in computer equipment and a little more money on a good teacher. I will discuss both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, a good teacher can teach us everything from the beginning. it
is a very good idea to spend more money on a good teacher than computer equipment. we
can learn practically as well as theoretically from a teacher to enhance our knowledge. With the help of a good teacher, we are being able to perform well in an interview and we can get a good job on our own ability. For example, without a teacher, we cannot make the difference between classwork and homework. a
teacher is the only person who is showing us a corrective path to be successful in our life. In addition, a teacher always teaches us how to tackle personal and professional obstacles. So, there should not be any doubt to spend money on a good teacher.
On the other hand, computer equipment is important to operate any computer but we cannot learn more realistic. There are many people who are just playing games and watching movies all the time because they are addicted to doing this. In this way, they cannot achieve anything in their life. For example, 90% of people do not need to buy equipment because they do not know how to operate them but still they are wasting their money on speakers, CPU's and so many other equipment
. In the end, they are just losing everything because they do not have knowledge or qualification to get a good job.
in
conclusion,
no matters how urgent you need to buy an equipment
for computers one should give priority to spending their money on a good teacher because we can achieve everything that we want if we have a good teacher in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other equipment', 'a good deal of other equipment'.
Suggestion: much other equipment; a good deal of other equipment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66279069767 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63315426158 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8802030786 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364228966326 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123379065224 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116156565173 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164715151668 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114362670326 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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