Today, a great number of countries all over the world depend on tourism to gain more income. It is argued that there are multiple issues associating with tourim. However, it is undeniable that there are benefits of tourism.
On the one hand, tourism could be a great way for individuals to unwind and alleviate stress. Since they have a huge amount of workload and assignments assigned by their bosses or lecturers, they might need a travel so as to get away from the bustling city life. As a result, they could comfortably relaxed, not to be care about anything and be ready for a new journey ahead leading to exellent performance at work or school. My brother, for example, used to be depressed with the test results a few years ago. He even thought of suicide to claim his life. However, with some advice given by his friend, he decided to spend some time to travel and explore the world ouside - which has always been new and unfamiliar to him. After a three - month vacation, he seems to become a brand new person with better insight into virtually everything in life, better communication skills- which really took me by surprise
On the other hand, there are quite a few disadvantages of tourism. Due to the fact that many infrastructure and skyscrapers are being constructed, the habitat of wildlife and marine ecosystem could be adversely affected. Animals such as tigers, lions or some living in the ocean like fish or crabs might be on the verge of extincion, leading to serious repercussions. There would be a decline in the animal populations and a negative effect on the biodiversity. It is, hence inevitable that people life would deteriorate in the long term. Furthermore, those who make a living on the tourist trade would have to suffer from poverty were there be a world economic downturn or an unexpected pandemic. Perhaps they may be out of work for a long time until the tourist trade thrives again. According to VTV3- a prevalent television channel in Viet Nam, reported that there are approximately three million citizens working in the tourist trade endured uncomfortable living condition when there was an emergence of covid 19 pandemic two years ago.
In conclusion, for all the demerits of tourism, I am convinced that the merits outweigh the demerits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... or lecturers, they might need a travel so as to get away from the bustling city life. A...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'relax'
Suggestion: relax
...fe. As a result, they could comfortably relaxed, not to be care about anything and be r...
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Line 3, column 89, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun infrastructure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many infrastructures'.
Suggestion: many infrastructures
...ntages of tourism. Due to the fact that many infrastructure and skyscrapers are being constructed, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86153846154 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75349064744 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5390990945 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136586250404 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449674187189 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449071381073 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986633146373 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356327215312 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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