Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence
At present, for various diseases such as Polio and small pox vaccines are provided in all government hospitals as well as in some public health centres. The ultimate aim of this facility is to prevent our kids from these diseases. Some people believe providing vaccines to children should be as made law while others assume it is individuals’ rights to offer vaccine for their kids. In my opinion, a law should be framed to enforce all parents to give vaccine for their kids to eradicate the above illness from the country.
Decades ago, for polio there was no vaccines provided hence many kids are affected by this disease, which becomes very tough to cure at later stage. For instance, after the government providing Polio vaccines to all infants, over the years the disease was completely eradicated from our country. Additionally, people below middle-class hesitant to go to government hospital due to huge crowd, therefore, the medical authorities should convene free camp every month to provide vaccine to all the kids. Moreover, the government should introduce new law to instruct every parent to put vaccines for their kids, it should be the minimum criteria for their admission to schools.
Furthermore, the parent who violates this law should be penalized, this will create awareness among them on the importance for providing vaccine to their kids. Similarly, the government should foster parents through advertisements about the potential danger if kids are not provided with vaccines. Besides, some private doctors charge huge fee from poor parents to vaccines their babies, such illegal act should be controlled and be provided with no charge.
In conclusion, in my view if parents are being given their own choice to vaccine their kids then some parents could ignore their children's health. Thus, I strongly recommend to introduce new law to protect our kids.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend introducing'.
Suggestion: recommend introducing
...heir childrens health. Thus, I strongly recommend to introduce new law to protect our kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18032786885 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66965791205 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4082692689 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270512654766 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1136879095 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837263769405 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195264351291 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341004395317 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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