Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Nowadays, vaccination is playing a vital role by preventing children from various ailments. There is a thought-provoking discussion on whether parents must be given freedom to decide for immunization of their offspring or should it be enforced as a law. Irrespective of the arguments that exist, I am of the opinion that vaccines are very helpful for adolescents and hence the government must make it a law for the parents to immunize the children. Through the course of this essay, I would like to put forth my points and calculations considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, people have a tendency to abide by the law, which can promote them to take their offspring for various vaccinations. This is important because today a host of parents are working; hence they do not emphasis on all activities equally. It is important to note that, they can forget these necessary things, and it could lead to hazardous situation in their lives. But this can be avoided, if people knew it was a law they would be worried about the outcome, and they would never forget to go for vaccinations. My sister, for instance, had almost neglected to take her first child for various vaccines, as there were no consequences from the authorities on her.
On the other side, if individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their adolescents, then people from the impoverished group might completely avoid it for a numerous reasons. Firstly, they cannot afford all the types of medicines and vaccinations for their children. Hence, it is the government who should not only educate the people but also sponsor all the type of vaccinations and forge it a compulsory effort for every parent. Since 2016 in India, as an illustration, there is not single Polio case detected. This was not possible untill a continuous push from the bureaucrats to the parents.
I see equally potential evidence to support my viewpoint and hence a law would the best suitable option than giving individuals right to decide immunization of their children. I am of the opinion that, parents must follow the law and help their offspring prevent themselves from various maladies. I am inclined to believe that, this will benefit the society as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...event themselves from various maladies. I am inclined to believe that, this will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88536545991 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7293477032 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.588235294 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210758323455 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665999218139 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539727668698 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134674317092 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264476945017 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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