Some people say that saving money is a good way and other say that spending money is the best way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and your opinion.
Although such topics likely will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on whether preserving money or spending it can lead our life towards happiness can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exists on either side my view is that, saving money could be very beneficial for future prospects.
At the start of the career, preserving a minuscule amount of salary can lead to generation of wealth at a later stage in life. Further, this amount will act as a boon during emergency situations, and after retirement people may also use it to survive independently. For instance, many Indians do savings during lifetime through retirement plans and insurance policies, which help them secure their future.
Moving ahead, it is also important that people enjoy their life to keep themselves rejuvenated. However, those who merely spend money may have lost their own aspirations. Hence, they use money as a tool to supply fake happiness. One clear example of this is the life of Bollywood stars, who spend enormous on their lifestyle, just to overcome their loneliness. Spending money may generate enjoyment but only temporarily.
To conclude, the habit of saving money can lead to mental peace, good fortune and happy life, which may not be possible by draining money aimlessly. So, my opinion is that people should save money for better life eventually bringing peace and positivity in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2660944206 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87453701162 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656652360515 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2771116169 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24424093722 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950311497192 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611891457954 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150059254561 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07813489091 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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