In many countries around the world, shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need. Discuss the reason for this trend. Is it a positive or negative development.
In several nations, shopping is considered as a leisure activity rather than buying good that are a necessity for people. This essay will first discuss the reason for this growing trend which is firstly, high disposable income and secondly, influence by companies advertisements. This essay will then argue that this is a very negative trend as it is not only an unproductive activity but also leads to piling of unnecessry goods.
The main reason for people's inclination towards shopping for fun is beacause shopping aids people to calm themselves as well as relax after a long hectic day at work. Buying expensive goods not only gives them a feeling of satisfaction but they also feel that they are doing well in life. Moreover, , people working in multinational organisations earn a handsome amount of salary, as a result they have a good amount of disposable income to purchase goods in their free time. Additionally,the influence by organisations marketing capaigns. People are constantly bombarded with several promotional essages, e-mails and pamphlets giving them information about the new products launched and how they will make life more convenient and easier. Thus, they feel pleased and contended while purchase those products.
However, according to me shopping for enjoyment without giving a thought is an unproductive activity. People waste their hard earned money in indescriminatly buying goods, does not help in their personality developement or enhancement in their knowledge. Instead, if they pursue activities such as sports or studies it will help them to physically and mentally fit. Furthermore, excessive shopping leads to building of pile of unncessary goods in home, which people throw away the products they don' need and increases the amount of waste and causes environment pollution.
In conclusion, people should purchase goods only if they need them, otherwise they should not spend their money in buying expensive good which are not important. People should understand that excessive shopping will have a plethora of negative effects as it does not lead to any develoepment of persona and builds a bundle of not needed items
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93246058987 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549707602339 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6674999919 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.2 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177990334452 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611831009993 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555336264708 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118125216864 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054388262551 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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