The development of transportation industry was immense over the centuries, which led to strict regulations being implemented. While, the age restrictions for driving had become mandatory, the norms in some nations authorize people to drive once they reach eighteen years of age. This is contradicted by growing number of people who suggest the age to start driving should be twenty-five. We will discuss both views here.
Countries having provisions for young adults to drive, point out to the undeniable fact that people get their voting rights when they turn eighteen, which is an equally responsible duty offered to any nation by its citizen. Also, the need for adults to drive is increasing in recent years due to the reason that, they become more independent in their young age. For example, a huge number of school going students drive themselves to and from schools nowadays. For this reason, Governments have set this age mark to ease the pressure of depending on others.
A handful of people, on contrary, opine that driving requires more attention and responsibility, which young adults lack. People over twenty years of age are more efficient, careful and do not indulge in reckless driving. Moreover, there are chances of young adults engaging themselves in delinquency and cause more accidents. A recent statistics for instance, reported that more road accidents are being caused by drivers below the twenty years mark. Adding to that, mature adults possess immense experience which eventually abates the rates of bad incidents.
On the whole, even though there is an immediate need for self-reliability among young adults to drive, it does not prove to be safe for themselves and others. But, mature adults would be more cautious when it comes to driving. Hence, I feel that the age criteria should be twenty-five years for driving.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74563087266 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.392179213 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264032181057 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960297934301 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893509298668 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18415786934 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114163977927 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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