In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone(cellphone)apps is become increasingly common.
Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?
Mobile phones become essential in our lives, people cannot live or move without holding it in their pockets, even their jobs rely daily life by using several mobile apps to pay their bills, bank transfer or purchase something. This era turned the world to be more developed; some thinks have advantages other disadvantages.
On one hand, mobile made life easier and faster through the apps. First, applications aid people in decreasing their movements in going shopping or pay their bills, they can do the process directly through app which could be linked to their bank account. However, such applications help in moving the countries from cash money into cashless, so people will start using their cards to pay online, where companies with governments can secure their money to avoid corruption. For example, most of the government sectors in Lebanon, are releasing apps, in order to pay bills through it, to reduce the number of paperwork and store data into the cloud servers.
On the other hand, some people think that mobile apps are not accurate and useless. Those applications for old individuals might think that such way will send incorrect information while they are paying or their bank accounts might be hacked, that is why they prefer to pay to the company immediately. Moreover, unemployment will increase in several sectors and affect negatively on the economy of undeveloped countries. For example, worker that work 8 hours a day in front of the screen, he/she prefer to go to the shopping center to purchase, where they can relax and enjoy their time, rather than using the app.
As a conclusion, mobile apps made people life easier by buying online or settling their bills and goods. Therefore, most corporations and countries are encouraging such apps, to guarantee their money and economy. The disadvantage of it, is that people especially old generation will not get familiar to use such mobile apps.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 497, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...rs a day in front of the screen, he/she prefer to go to the shopping center to purchas...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08176100629 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58901110879 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5176820279 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192700144506 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702060747812 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403035311051 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12804392756 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546002432649 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.