In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways.
What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?
Give relevant examples from your experience.
Health is known to be the greatest wealth. However, opting for a lifestyle which is unhealthy poses adverse effects on general wellbeing of people in most countries. In my opinion, it is owing to lack of exercise and poor dietary habits. The following paragraphs will discuss the causes and possible ways to combat this issue.
I believe the main reason of such health problems is sedentary life style which is prevalent these days. This is due to minimal physical activity that results in obesity and further leads to incurable ailments like Diabetes, Hypertension and cardiac problems. Studies conducted in USA and UK, for example, concluded that more than 80% people diagnosed with Diabetes have common routine of lack of mobility and exercise. Furthermore, consuming fats and calories through junk food is another contributor in this regard. Reason being fast food outlets are ubiquitous nowadays with mouthwatering taste, reasonable price and easy to eat. Therefore, people burning less calories by workout and eating less nutritious food get encountered with health issues across the world.
Nevertheless, these health issues can be controlled by improving lifestyle and food choices. Any kind of physical activity or sport should be an indispensable ritual owing to the fact that burning calories help to get rid of the accumulated fat. People who walk 30 minutes atleast 5 days a week, for instance, have proven to live longer and healthier compared to those who act otherwise. In addition, fast food restaurants can provide healthier alternatives in their menus. Mc Donald’s, for example, has introduced an option for selecting a banana instead of French fries in kid’s meal. In short, involving in some kind of physical exercise and making more nutritious culinary choices are the attainable solutions for health related ailments.
To conclude, people across the globe are suffering from diseases due to sedentary lifestyle. Nonetheless, being more active and eating healthy can overcome such issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer calories'?
Suggestion: fewer calories
... easy to eat. Therefore, people burning less calories by workout and eating less nutritious f...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun calories is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... easy to eat. Therefore, people burning less calories by workout and eating less nut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40378548896 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80465591409 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627760252366 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7666647828 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201830983797 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566656535836 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301405576307 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115680701641 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139336940813 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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