Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world s major cities Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions

Essay topics:

Traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

Traffic has become a major concern for people across the globe. Increased use of personal vehicle for commutation and narrow roads are the 2 main causes for the issue while this can be solved by promoting more use of public transportation and widening the roads.

To start with the problems causing traffic congestions include the private vehicles usage by the residents. It has become a trend this days, to travel using self owned vehicles. Moreover, with the increase in the number of the private vehicles, more parking space is needed. Due to limited parking area, apparently vehicles are parked on the roads creating traffic problems. Also, in many cities, roads are quite narrow to accommodate huge number of vehicles in specific traffic hours. For example, 48% of people have accepted in a road survey that they park their vehicles on roads due to no parking facilities in some area. Thus, using the personal cars and the narrow roads are creating major issues in most cities.

There are solutions available for all human created problems. To suffice the traffic issue, government needs to come forward and appeal to the people to help use and promote public transportation. For example, in Mumbai, people are charged only 20 R's for 10 total kilometer radius, thus promoting good and safe transportation services. Also, building fly overs is also a solution to reduce traffic. Either roads can be broadened or the fly overs can be built to curb the problem.

To close, with the increasing population there would be increase in the number of vehicles on road but with a good public transportation schemes and widened roads, the problems can be lessened to a certain extent. Thus, leading to a safe and enjoyable travel for work or for holidays.

Votes
Average: 6.5 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
...traffic congestions include the private vehicles usage by the residents. It has become a...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...by the residents. It has become a trend this days, to travel using self owned vehicl...
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Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'radius' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'radii', 'radiuses'.
Suggestion: radii; radiuses
...arged only 20 Rs for 10 total kilometer radius, thus promoting good and safe transport...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00340136054 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61992431656 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8932327166 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172240986421 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602920700731 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364697936384 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105528398492 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272019619094 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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