Some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on TV such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Physical fitness has gained huge importance in recent days. Masses of people argue that people get motived towards being physically fit is by watching Olympic Games and varied of world cups, while fraction of people urge to use other mediums to get involved in exercising. I strongly believe there are myriad of ways to stay healthy other than games coming on Television.
To start, there are ample of areas which can boost the morale of people who wants to exercise in their regular life. To add, the health problems these days and the sitting jobs are the major issues that can be solved by understanding the importance of exercising , walking or Yoga. Having said that, getting involved in any of the sports activity can also help masses to gain good health. For example, in school, students are not actually ready for participating in any big championships but exercising is a regular part to keep them mentally and physically strong. Hence, exercising can be a part of our mundane tasks just to stay fit and free from diseases or being obese.
On the other hand, People have huge preference for games like Olympics or world cups. They aim to take part in such sports on a bigger level to do great heights in big sports event. Moreover, these sports motivates them to exercise regularly to qualify in the world cups and championships. For instance, Mayanka, a great marathon player, is motivated to join new York marathon in the upcoming years so her basic motivation is the the winner cup that she would carry on being the winner. She exercises daily with jogging and instruments in Gym to be physically fit. In such cases, motivation level is really high to reach the targets.
Finally, exercise and physical fitness go hand in hand. Just by being motivated by sports events cannot merely help you to be fit. It needs strong determination along with a passion for somebody to stay healthy. Thus exercising, walking or yoga can help people to be strong and healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, hence, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84705882353 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54931326373 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567647058824 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9782557303 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5555555556 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238098618321 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758477427067 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620435206024 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14893253192 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654052213076 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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