You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Organizing any sports event in one country has always been a debatable topic. Some people are of a view that such events should be encouraged while some say this is not a good thing for a country. I believe hosting such events can be beneficial as it gives global exposure to the country worldwide ,thus including ways to generate extra source of income.
To embark with the positives, world level recognition of any country plays a pivotal role in any country's development. Hence, organizing a international sports event in a country can make people aware and also motivates them to visit that particular country to witness their likeable sports event at a different location. This in turn boosts the tourism of a nation, generating income for the tourist guides, hotels, restaurants and ancient or locally made products.For instance, During cricket tournaments, cricketers on India visit hosting countries along with their immediate family and also makes sure to visit the known places of those economies.
However, it is believed that this organizing of events can reduce the importance of the local games. To add , the international sports get more publicity as compared to local games,for example, Cricket is a popular sport in India but football isn’t a national level game here. So people would acknowledge more cricketers and would not be fascinated to know any footballers, thus leading to a shift in downward trend for a local event. To conclude, nobody would call a local footballer in any opening of a stadium, but would rather invite a cricketer to the inauguration.
To conclude, international events has both views that are in favour and against the hosting of such events. I firmly believe the merits are more than the de merits as it involves world wide credibility for a hosting country making every nation to believe in their work and culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Organizing any sports event in one country has always been a ...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...global exposure to the country worldwide ,thus including ways to generate extra so...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...countrys development. Hence, organizing a international sports event in a country...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ts and ancient or locally made products.For instance, During cricket tournaments, c...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he importance of the local games. To add , the international sports get more publi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...ore publicity as compared to local games,for example, Cricket is a popular sport in ...
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Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... more than the de merits as it involves world wide credibility for a hosting country makin...
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Line 6, column 179, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... more than the de merits as it involves world wide credibility for a hosting country makin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06796116505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80206553812 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559870550162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1424755788 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224016993953 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929776528431 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765786222988 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146250798963 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718691884008 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.