It is better to save money than to spend it. how far do you agree with the statement? Is saving more important in today's world? Give reasons for your answers and provide ideas and examples from your own knowledge or experience.
This era, we are living in, is growing and developing with every passing second. Money is of utmost importance when it comes to any kind of Transaction or financial dealing. Few urge to save money for upcoming expenses and not having unnecessary expenditures. In my opinion, saving is important for medical as well as education, in the contrary huge expenses can make us bankrupt and bring us on road.
Money holds great importance in today's world. Life is impossible if we do not have enough savings for our mundane tasks even. Investment in good medical or health insurance can surely benefit the people in long run wherein we need to invest just a minimal amount for unforseen circumstances. Secondly, education these days have huge investment. It is the foremost priority of any citizen to gain basic education which ultimately helps in getting a better job and upgrading their financial position. In a recent survey, it declared that 45℅ of people save for future and they end up living a comfortable golden age without any intervention from either government or from their children's. Thus showing us that the amount saved today could be fruitful in upcoming days.
On the other hand, it is exclaimed by some that we should live in present and forget to worry about future. As per them, spending on anything other then basic needs is providing them a status to hold them high in society. Mostly, the expenses occur out of the competition to stand different different and higher when compared to others. This action can sometimes lead to bankruptcy and compelled people to even beg for having food and shelter. Should expenses be done just to impress others? Will that be useful in considering the ever changing world? Hence unnecessary expenses should be avoided.
Concluding, savings and investment makes a person independent. Expenses which are not required should be excluded from our lives. I would opine, one must make sure to save certain amount for their future which can never be predicted. This would surely solve greatest of our problems that are dealt in monetary terms.
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...in considering the ever changing world? Hence unnecessary expenses should be avoided....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, kind of, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99428571429 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64544892221 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.187539131 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161626251379 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474646155684 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462971337783 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993843014723 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484542065928 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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