You work for an international company and you would like to spend 6 months working in its head office in another county.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter write
Explain why you want to work in the company's head office for 6 months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask his/ her help for arrangement.
Hello Sir,
I hope you are doing well. This letter requests your extra attention to allow me to visit the Oxford for enhancing my SAP skills.
Firstly, I would like you to know that due to immense competition, SAP is growing by each passing day. During an official call with my client, I came to know that if I don't upgrade in skills from SRM to MM then it could be possible that soon I need to move out. However, going through different conversations, I have come to know that 6 months training is going to be conducted in our head office at Oxford post 4 months.
This might worry you for my part of the work.
But, I assure you that work handled by me would not get affected due to the training. I have collected every small details about the training and you would be pleased to learn that I would be getting 3 hours of time daily, which I would use for responding to emails and would prompt to complete my BAU task.
Lastly, I would ask your help for few arrangements which needs to be done on managerial level. Please send my name recommendation ahead to the head office. Only then I can get the invite. After getting the invitation, I need to arrange for flight ticket as well as my accommodation.
I look forward to hearing from you positively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir, I hope you are doing well. This letter r...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ith my client, I came to know that if I dont upgrade in skills from SRM to MM then i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42307692308 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53156347856 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623931623932 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5496230629 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6153846154 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261448607943 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896566158564 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579887310796 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138821368641 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501510300052 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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