Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Environmental issues have become the primary concern for everyone today. For this, some people argue that it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment while others assert, it should be on personal level to look after the environment. I believe it should be a collective efforts by both government and the people to protect the environment.
To start, saving nature and unleashing natural resources in an best way is the duty of all human beings. Having said that everyone needs to start thinking for easy ways by which they can spread the message to rest of the world to protect the environment. For example, if each society in a particular city thinks to plant 50 trees during monsoon season, each year, then we can surely curb the issue of reduction of natural things on our planet. Moreover, being a part of the this mother earth, it should come from within for the protection of environment. Everyone should come forward and save the nature.
Conversely, government can be the finest mediator here. Collective efforts by all residents and our administration can surely give us, the better results. To add, motivational posters, save environment campaigns, planting of trees by all and save water, save earth, less usage of plastics and all such efforts by our supreme authority can boost the morale of everyone. For instance, government can award people who put in their efforts to save our mother earth. This will motivate everyone to come forward and give their inputs. Hence, governments can play a pivotal role to guide everyone and help the people to step in towards saving environment.
To close, Earth is the only planet where human existence is possible. Everyone including all government and rest of the residents of all the countries can join hands and propose abundant options to save the nature. More greenery means we would eat good along with living a good and healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ure and unleashing natural resources in an best way is the duty of all human being...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ure and unleashing natural resources in an best way is the duty of all human being...
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Line 7, column 471, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...n our planet. Moreover, being a part of the this mother earth, it should come from withi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99690402477 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68264780017 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5354538967 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9411764706 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201010721359 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693867734829 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103112637209 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140842772049 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156001789203 0.056905535591 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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