You need a book and you didn t find it in the library Write a letter to a bookshop manager and say Describe the book Why do you need it How will you pay for it

Essay topics:

You need a book and you didn’t find it in the library. Write a letter to a bookshop manager and say

– Describe the book.

– Why do you need it?

– How will you pay for it?

Hello Sir

I am writing this letter for my concern for not getting the Cambridge books that I wanted from the wordsmith library, this week.

Let me describe everything in detail. I already informed the bookseller earlier this week about my need for the book. I was assured by your seller that I would get the Cambridge books for ielts on this thursday. This is the 15th version of the book and it has been newly launched in the market.

This book is highly important for me as I am sitting for the exam this month. It includes all the relevant practice test from the latest exams. To add, this book is very important in terms of the new exam pattern that has changed only from this time. Therefore, I am in dire need of this book. Without it, it would get difficult for me to appear for the exam.

As I am residing out of the town in the outskirt area so it is nearly impossible for me to again visit the library to collect books. I would ask you to please deliver it to my mentioned address by this weekend. I would pay the book amount by Paytm as it is accepted there. Moreover, please make sure to send them on correct address and if I am not available at home, you can deliver it to my neighbor, Mr. Ilash Sisodiya. I would later collect it from him. My address is already provided to the Mr. Hardik in the library.

I look forward for receiving the book at the earliest. Please let me know for any other required detail.

Your's faithfully

Urvashi Singh

Votes
Average: 7.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31158347931 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.216922479 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4736842105 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73684210526 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208233458309 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661660897265 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472111025567 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12153400229 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229150073015 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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