Q. If a product is sold and people buy it then advertisement is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?
Many companies have a belief that they do not require to advertise their products for which demand and supply ratio goes adequately, else the advertisement may become a sort of entertainment. I believe, although, some popular durables may not require publicity, it will definitely play a paramount role for the other products with less popularity.
Some organisations strictly oppose the idea of wasting millions on promoting their products just to gain the social attention whereas their focus remains on delivering world-class quality only. Despite the non-promotional approach, they manage to reach to their customer base and meet the organisational purpose. To illustrate, Lamborghini, an Italian automobile company, which is famous worldwide for its sports cars manufacturing, has never officially advertised its vehicles through televisions, social media or other modes, still their demand in the market is on a rapid fire. Hence, advertisement of a product is useless at this point and considered to be an entertainment source.
On the flip side, many firms invest immense money on products' advertisements to boost their reputation. For this, famous celebrities are also approached by offering enormous finances to commercialize it. Consequently, a majority of people come to know about the company and its products while sitting in front of their computer screens and televisions and they decide whether to purchase them or not according to their needs. Take Indian cricket team's jursey as an example, where the oppo mobile company has advertised its name and logo on it to promote their smartphones. Undoubtedly, such promotional techniques push the demand level on a high note.
To sum up, it is a moderate situation as both sides are equally balanced because many organisations consider it as an unnecessary approach whereas for others, there is a desperate need of advertisement to scale up their businesses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advertising'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: advertising
... have a belief that they do not require to advertise their products for which demand and sup...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ts to boost their reputation. For this, famous celebrities are also approached by offering enormou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, may, so, still, whereas, while, as for, sort of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18261122615 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648829431438 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4947765949 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1266145155 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506462402499 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533579523359 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796259186082 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246700989151 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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