Ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and in magazines. Do you think it is a positive development?
Glamour world has a special attraction in the lives of the ordinary people. People are so influenced with the celebrities that they tend to follow them by imitating them. I believe it has both positive as well as negative impact.
To embark on, common people spend most of their free time in watching cinemas or series on TV channels. It has become a trend to copy their favourite celebs for many youngsters, who believe they would get enough attention just by following the latest fashion as per the film stars dressing or their interviews in any popular magazines. For instance, Forbes magazine claimed that Salman Khan is the most followed personality amongst the young crowd. His names T shirts, bands are on high selling and 67% people want to become like Salman Khan. Thus, huge impact of known personalities can be seen in the mindset of the ordinary people.
Flipping the coin, there are inborn talent which many, as a juvenile recognize at a very early age. There are few skills which can be learnt with some practice and clear understanding. If people realize this hidden talent, they can become equally popular as the film stars. For example, in one of the surveys published in newsletter last week, it revealed that about 46% of people are still not aware they are good in which activity or what do they want to pursue as their dream or career. This indeed leads them to doing jobs or business just for money sake. Therefore, it is highly important to have self realisation to lead a peaceful yet joyous life.
In conclusion, following or imitating exactly the superstar we follow should not be the case. Instead, self learning of our inner traits or enhancing them is equally valuable. It can be a better combination if we follow a known personality but along with that we improve our skills too. This would help us to lead a better and a satisfied life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75840978593 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50273630051 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1796482643 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167562256999 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446738525892 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476004536887 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979359227724 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569449732701 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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