Some people believe giving gifts to friends and family is to show them that we care. Others think that there are more important ways. Discuss both and give ur views.
Gifts and presents are increasingly becoming popular nowadays among all the demographics of society. Some dwellers reckon that it is an imperative medium to show care towards our family and friends while a fraction of masses ponders that there are a plethora of other ways to showcase our love such as spending the quality time and providing some useful advises. This essay will further elucidate on both sides of the notion.
To embark on, the supporters of the former stance advocate that gifts act as a mediator between people to convey their feelings, emotions and care. This is because they can be customised nowadays as per the need and requirement of a person. As a result, it shows that a person is aware about the receiver’s likes and dislikes and choosing a gift accordingly. For instance, according to a recent survey published in the newspaper states that 85% of the people in India prefer to get personalised gifts from their loved ones like photo mobile cases or picture printed T-shirts.
Conversely, there is a myriad of other ways through which a person can show his care. Spending the quality time with their family and friends will help in building a healthy relationship between them. This is because pricey gifts and fancy ornaments are not always necessary to reveal one’s affection. On top of that, providing appropriate and useful advises along with taking care of them physically and mentally play an indispensable role in showing love. To illustrate, a daughter-in-law shows her caring nature by serving her in-laws and a son-in-law can also do that in the same way for his wife in-laws.
Therefore, to recapitulate from the above discussion, it is evident that gifts and presents play an pivotal role in showing one’s affection and care. However, admittedly, there is no denial in the fact that the other factors like spending a quality time, exchanging useful advises and taking care of them have certainly wins this debate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, conversely, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, such as, as a result, in the same way, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04587155963 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78208141399 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.405843653 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202000089301 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655546588972 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358103835131 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124012949384 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245387931197 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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