Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Conservation of environment is a crucial need of today's world. A section of society believes government to take authority to protect the environment; whereas, few people opine that every person should take this responsibility. In my opinion, environment preservation is a combine duty of the government and the citizens.
The government has wide access to check the environment, and has power to frame policies nationwide. Undeniably, government rules such as saving sanctuaries, forests and growing more trees can help to a great extent. Heavy penalties on destroying forests and wildlife could certainly contribute towards greener world. The laws can be implemented to use Compressed Natural Gas (CNG) engines in vehicles and imposing tax on factories emitting poisonous gases. Secondly, the awareness campaigns can reach throughout the country through media and communication, which can motivate population towards cleaner and greener habitat. The programs on global warming and change in climate can open eyes of citizens and encourage them to save the world by keeping the planet unpolluted.
Despite the above facts, I also believe that citizens are equally responsible for environmental protection. Admittedly, if only government take actions and citizens do not come forward then it is of no use. Every individual should take this ownership and must follow steps that can add to the preservation of environment. For example, if country people starts using public transport instead of private vehicle, then they can invariably contribute towards cleaner atmosphere. Similarly, people can gift plants on occasions and run the propaganda to plant more trees.
To end, I pen down saying that administrative bodies as well as every person should abide the laws of environmental conservation and take responsibility to enhance the environment we live in.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58450704225 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1291863449 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630281690141 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2303309297 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214356199599 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683254329785 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707477650767 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143357326153 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691746740555 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.