In many countries, people now wear western-style dress such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is that? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that many people around the world now dress the way western citizens do; suits and jeans are good examples. There exist a number of compelling reasons behind this increasing trend. However, it is considered to be a negative evolution.
To begin with, some reasons are behind this phenomenon. Firstly, piquing more and more local people’s interest, especially juveniles, these western societies are very influential when it comes to fashion. In other words, the indigenous residents of more third-world countries tend to copy the latest fashion designs (dress code) introduced in the western world. The existence of the internet also expedites this trend as many social networking applications, such as Instagram and Facebook, are a perfect showcase for the latest dress code by desirable models. Therefore, the youngsters of these local areas find them attractive, and in turn, have the tendency to mindlessly follow the western culture.
This development, however, is believed to be not quite positive. As a matter of fact, traditional grab carries a great part of history with itself. It simply means that they are a meaningful and noteworthy aspect of culture and tradition of each territory. It is very beautiful when we see that indigenous people wear their own local-style dresses in their ceremonies. So, if those people avoid using their conventional dresses and clothes, it is aking to losing their identity. Thus, all members of different cultures should take the responsibility to save their local customs as well as other traditions.
In conclusion, globalization is happening all over the world. Needless to say that clothing is not an exception, and is undergoing massive changes. Nevertheless, local traditions, as well as their clothing styles, should be preserved and protected since it is a paramount facet of their history.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, third, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31399317406 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96505131711 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4714210485 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5882352941 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23841369345 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623777898603 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573971820797 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134299612408 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700039087078 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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