For the past few decades it has been observed that people moved to different location after their retirement, few choose foreign country and other move to some other past of their country. There are many facts behind this trend, like, peaceful environment, security, overall living expenditures etc. In this essay I will discuss how these factors influence the retired person to move another location.
There are several key-factors that make the vital role to shift from one location to another location once someone gets retired from his or her job. First important factor is security, it is proven fact that no one wants to live in a atmosphere where he or she does not feel secure, because of this people moved to some area where there will be less crime and less crowed. Thus, people select the option to shift to a different place where they can survive without any fear or worries. For an example, In India seventy percent people moved to countryside after their retirement, and the main reason for this trend is most of the India metro cities are enormously polluted so people give first preference to rural areas to spend their final yeas of their life.
Another key-point which also play important rule is overall living expenses, As we all know that life in cities are more expensive compared to small town, therefore, people prefer to move far away from urban area, so that they can spend their life with nominal money. For an instance, living cost in a village or rural ares is twenty time less expensive compared to metropolitan. Furthermore, most of the under developed countries do not have pension policy, so those who works in private sector does not get any money from their employer after their retirement, therefore, most people always go where they can live happy life with their savings.
To conclude, This is fact many countries people shift to different area after their retirement. As per my opinion living cost and social security play important role in this area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
...roven fact that no one wants to live in a atmosphere where he or she does not fee...
Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
...or she does not feel secure, because of this people moved to some area where there w...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92625368732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37304588056 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554572271386 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2508771876 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316148637515 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12176244548 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108111017662 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221513948399 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049371071954 0.056905535591 87% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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