In many countries, people today are living in a "throwaway society", where things are used in a short time and then thrown away. What are its causes. What are its problems.
The phenomenon of “throwaway societies» has become a wide-spread issue in the modern world. There seem to be several reasons and consequences of this challenge, which will be discussed in this essay.
Speaking about possible reasons, first of all, the persistent increase of amount of products consumed by the population should be mentioned. In other words, nowadays, people prefer purchasing a new item instead of repairing a broken one contributing to the growth of production. Another significant reason for this trend appears to be the global market which facilitates the spreading of disposable goods, such as plastic bottles and dishes. In many cases, this plastic items should be recycled, however, there are many countries, which cannot manage this challenge and just gather all waste in remote areas. Finally, the economy of many countries was built in the way requiring the annual growth. Thus, to encourage creating of an efficient market and, as a result, a high level of revenue, the industry has started to produce low-quality products. So, customers have to update their stuff and equipment more frequently.
When it comes to possible consequences of the discussed tendency, no doubts, aggravation of litter problem has become the dramatic outcome of “throwaway society” and a burning issue for each country. For instance, endless amount of plastic stuff seems to be contained in the world ocean. Also, gathering rubbish on remote locations without recycling influences negatively on the local environment contributing to contamination of soil, water, and air. Finally, being generally accepted fact, the industrial growth exacerbates the global warming issue.
All in all, the main reasons for existing of “throwaway societies» appear to be high-level of humans consumption and industrial production, which leads to global ecological problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, no doubt, speaking about, such as, as a result, first of all, in many cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62237762238 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09189183187 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.758184354 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0586400667928 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198979934191 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251116486393 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040953213974 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133957823548 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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