In many countries, there is shortage of mathematics and science teachers in
high school.
What do you think has caused this problem and what can be done about it?
It is a fact that many nations are facing huge shortfall of teachers, specially for maths and science subjects, to teach high school students. Before providing any solution to this problem, it is imperative to discuss the root cause behind it.
The main reason behind this predicament is that the salary of teachers, those who teach math and science subjects, are very less as compared to other professions. This is to say that the teachers who have expertise in maths and science domain can earn much higher salary in other professions, such as accountant and laboratory technician, as compared to the salaries in school. As a result, people prefer to opt for other technical jobs rather than working as a teacher due to monetary benefits. For instance, as per the recent media report, salary of math and science teachers in India is not revised since last 8 years, which resulted in many teachers opting out of teaching professional and taking other jobs.
The best solution to this issue is to raise the salaries of teachers. The government should come forward and take some unprecedent steps to device policies in favor of salary raise for these teachers. This would attract more people to join back teaching domain. Particularly, if maths and science teacher are getting paid equally to other professions then they world never leave their teaching professional. As a result, the shortfall of teachers can be mitigated by provided appropriate salaries. For example, a similar initiative was taken in Germany during 2007, when they raised the salary of Army staff so that more youngster get started and shortage of fighters can be filled.
To conclude, correctly many nations have scarcity of maths and science teacher in their schools because of less salary structure that is in place. I believe to mitigate the gap between the demand and supply of the required professional government should restructure the compensation for these jobs to entice more people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ath and science subjects, are very less as compared to other professions. This is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08950617284 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68403373922 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552469135802 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1206116346 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175057634099 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665178264299 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408178642244 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113436220484 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215336553508 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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