Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time.
To What Extent Do you agree or disagree.
In modern society, education plays a pivotal role in a person’s self-development, and it is wildly believed in many nations that young students should spend their spare time on doing homework. I completely disagree with this statement.
Multiple detrimental impacts can be brought into life if children’s leisure time is sacrificed for their schoolwork. First of all, the relationship with their parents will be negatively affected due to the lack of family time, as a strong family bond requires spending time with family members, such as have conversation after dinner and go to a park during the weekends. Furthermore, additional schoolwork also puts extra mental stress on students, which lowers their study efficiency and reduces their sense of well bing. In the long-term, it will hinder students from making progress in improving their academic performance.
On the other hand, students can gain various benefits if they participate in other meaningful events rather than just finishing homework in their free time. For example, children can use their spare time to acquire computer skills, because children who build early confidence and experience in these abilities are at a distinct advantage over those who have not. Also, children can be encouraged to join hobby groups after school, as such activity can widen their horizons as well as help them reach their potential, therefore they can become more competitive in the future fierce competition.
In conclusion, doing homework in the free time will hurt students’ family connections and the quality of their homework. However, students can become more versatile and sophisticated if given opportunities to take part in other activities during their free time. Thus, I disagree that children have to do homework in their free time.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43462897527 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95371698983 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7624587133 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286593591125 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127646321195 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11914959168 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193883055118 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929105366944 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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