Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Currently, keeping pets has become a prevalent phenomenon world widely, and it is believed by some that children can benefit from having animals around them; however, others argue that pets can be threating to both children’s safety and health. In this essay, I will discuss both schools of thought and provide my point of view at the end of this essay.
The advocators believe that keeping pets in the family can help children foster a sense of responsibility, because they will be asked to take care of the animals, which will help them understand the fact that their actions can effects other lives. In addition, having pets is beneficial to children’s mental health, because animals can provide children a good company and make them feel less lonely while their parents are gone. It is true that in modern society most parents spend a lot of time on their career and often leave their children alone at home.
On the other hand, the opponents assert that keeping animals at home can put children in danger, as the news has reported couple incidents about the pets attacking their owners, and the younger generations are even more vulnerable to animal attacks as they are physically weaker. Moreover, it is possible for humans, especially younger ones who are still developing their immune system, to catch an illness from animals, and the longer time people spend with the pets, the higher chance of catching a disease from the animals.
In conclusion, it is true that pets sometimes can be violent and unhealthy, but an animal training school can provide the pets with behavior training programs and vaccination to protect their owners. Furthermore, children who own pets are more likely to be accountable and have more good time when they are alone. Therefore, I am convinced that children should be encouraged to own pets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60032911432 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9536801048 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.7 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19019215758 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756093803653 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366508731083 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119188380323 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197190482401 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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