While it is argued by many that children are benefitted when pets are around them, others consider it as a risk and detrimental for their health. In my opinion, although human friendly animals may help children teaching loyalty, this may turn out lethal if proper precautionary measures are not taken.
On the one hand, it is believed by many that pet’s presence around children is advantageous in their development. This is because human friendly animals, such as dogs and cats are found to be loyal to their masters and there are a number of examples which proves their loyalty. In todays' world if children get to know more about loyalty from such speechless living beings, they can become an ideal citizen when they are grown adults. Thus, in the long run it is beneficial for children to be accompanied by pets.
On the other hand, many people think, and I agree with their opinion that pets' presence around children can turnout turn out dangerous and a potential reason of their illness. This may happen because they are prone to dieses disease due to the underdeveloped immune system. For example, most of the times it is observed that children are the first victim of any viral flu or any virus attack. As a result, when dogs or cats are around children, they unknowingly transfer bacteria that is are growing on their body to vulnerable living beings i.e. children. If these animals are not vaccinated by a vet, this bacterial transfer can cause them irreversible damage and to a further extent can cause death if a virus like H1N1 are proliferated.
To conclude, despite the fact that animals can teach young adults about loyalty, I personally think that, this accompany may cost them their life if pets are not timely medicated. In future also we may consider human animal relationship for in a constructive society, but only when there is no threat to human life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85448916409 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59284552448 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2127647989 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162386442132 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620997184906 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662417502222 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102192600494 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369931933058 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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