In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
In today's full of strong news world, news is announced by various ways such as newspaper, TV or Internet. But statistics showed that proportion of youth who are found out news from by newspaper or TV is sharply decreased. There are variety of possible reasons for this, but steps can be definitely taken to tackle the problem.
In my opinion, three main factors are to blame for. Firstly, newspaper and TV news are released only two times a day at most so that they usually inform out of dated news while young people can be aware from latest news only by one click on net without any delay. Secondly, They are not accessible. To be more specific, we couldn't access to newspaper or TV as easy as Internet. For example, TV is available at home or private places. In addition, newspapers are published in big size papers that makes hard to carry them. The last but not least, news on newspaper or TV can not cover all subjects. For instance, Most of them are about political issue such as declaring of war by one country and negotiation to truce by another counties or another subjects like these. Whilst, these days, young people are more interested in news about celebrities or their private lives. These kind of news wasn't taken any notice from public media so youth would explore the net for this sort of news.
To reverse this trend, there are some approaches that can be done by government. Allotting a channel to news on TV would be an effective solution that make possible to announce news promptly after happened. Moreover, by this approach, there is enough time for covering all subjects that are favored for different ages. Besides, public media should be more available. To dig little deeper, people should access to TV news from their smart phone or smaller size papers should be used for publication of newspapers.
In conclusion, there are some reasons for willing of youth to other media except TV and newspaper for knowing of news such as out dating of their news, announcing some special news or uneasy to access. While there are some steps that can be tackle by government for overwhelming this problem which are entrancing of news channel on TV or publication of handy bag size newspapers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: from the latest
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
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Suggestion: wasn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blication of handy bag size newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74352331606 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50237209271 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9794599807 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.55 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191433279113 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656341372478 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432095595481 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134327253076 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240793797794 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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